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Mime-Version: 1.0 Date: Tue, 25 Apr 1995 12:23:21 From: waltn@cts.com (Walt Nelson) To: rabbett@aloha.com Subject: Hot H4 Errors.... Status: RO
Hello,
I logged on to your page from the "Whats New on the Web" this morning. I have a friend who is from Hawai'i and try to download/print everything I can find for her.
She was absolutely delighted with your www page, expecially the article on "Hula Images from the Merrie Monarch" She performed hula extensively not too many years ago. Great work...keep up the work! Btw, do you know if there is a local newspaper that publishes on the web? She is very interested in what is going on back home.
Now on to her bid for the Tee Shirt! She asked me not to include the punctuation so what you are getting is ATOS (all that other stuff) she found.
On the errorcontest.html page:
1. First paragraph...."crusin'" should be spelled "cruisin'"
2. Second paragraph...."through out" should be "throughout"
On the hula.html page:
1. Fourth sentence down..."afficianados" should be spelled "afficionados"
2. Fifth paragraph..."explaination" should be spelled "explanation"
3. Eighth paragraph... "accomodations" should be spelled "accommodations"
4. Ninth paragraph... " equiptment" should be spelled "equipment"
For identification, I counted paragraphs as those with a line feed just above.
Thanks again for all the work. I know what it requires...keep up the good work!
Mahalo
Good eyes Walt! Your H4 Tee will be whizzing it's way to you very soon now! Mahalo for your kind efforts!
Rabbett